Binded Hearts (Discussion)

Well, I recently had a huge hit of inspiration while I was on my way home (no, no drugs), and I decided that I'd give another fanfic a shot since there were too many complications with my old one that I couldn't overcome. Anyway, post here for anything about the fanfic, whether it be, compliments, constructive criticism (not hate XD), whatever it may be.

Oh no, heeeeerrrrreeee we go...... XDDDDDDD

*dying of laughter*

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AND GIMME BACK MY TWIX!! DX

LOL! I am like the dark under ruler one behind things.XD

Lucxene wrote:LOL! I am like the dark under ruler one behind things.XD

Yup, the puppeteer behind the scenes XD

Celica wrote:Oh no, heeeeerrrrreeee we go...... XDDDDDDD

*dying of laughter*

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AND GIMME BACK MY TWIX!! DX

And no! The Twix's belong to me now!...wait, you can just buy another box or something >>;

EDIT: 2nd part has been posted, sorry if it's a bit long XD. We'll start going into some interesting stuff after this one, so keep checking in ;D

Zi....did...did you just ACCIDENTALLY COP A FEEL ON YOUR OWN SISTER!??? DX

*ties Zion to a stone table and prepares for the "Purification"*

In any case...I guess it was a good chapter... << >>;;

And "slore"? Lol...making up naughty words, huh? Bad bad Zi....

Lmao oh man I like this story already xDD

So according to Zi's friends, does that make me a GILF? Rofl xDDD

LOL you can't help but just laugh...XD Geez,I hate to see myself in the faculty office. Hah hah!

Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

ROFLMAAAOOO!!! XDDDD

OMG Zion you are such a dork! *means it in a good, cutesy way*

You and that motorcycle...I swear....XDDDDD

LMAO!! Omg I laughed so hard with that last chapter. I was reading while on the train on my way home from work and tried to laugh quietly but that Zordon comment made me laugh out loud xDD

Btw, who would have known that a team of Care Bears would have been so....as Zion would put it, badass! xDDDD

Liah wrote:LMAO!! Omg I laughed so hard with that last chapter. I was reading while on the train on my way home from work and tried to laugh quietly but that Zordon comment made me laugh out loud xDD

Btw, who would have known that a team of Care Bears would have been so....as Zion would put it, badass! xDDDD

Oh man, a giant Mjrn head, try imagining that...lmao...

XD well er, you guys were the badass ones, I just got myself violated >> while your Sentinel dropkicked Ryze and while Cel stole all his money ROFL

Hey! I wouldn't steal someone else's money! The only person I steal from is Zion.... <<;;;;

*bursts into laughter and rolls on the floor*

OMG I CANT TAKE IT! BADASS CARE BEARS! XDDDD

The whole bit with Mjrn-Zordon made me laugh so hard too XD

LOL, that would so fit me white clothes and a samurai person however...A sword would be too manly...So to fit my uke personality...XD It's a woman weapon naginata! With flowers all around.XD Oh geez it's such a funny fic.

Woot I was waiting for a new post today. Checking the forums every now and then earlier today.

Hahaha! Good Luck with the girl, Zi! xD
Good chapter! Keep 'em coming!

*takes a break from repetitive computer paperwork*

LMAO Otaku Pirates! XD "Slores" indeed...

And omg I <333 Lucx's Sentinel! Oh but I love Liah's smexy bunny man too!

Thanks for posting another chapter bro, I needed something to give myself a break. >>;

Its going great so far, I hope you make it out.... alive.... XD

lol yus xD Bunny Man is uber smexy. Lucx and Kaz's are awesome too xD

Though I'm curious as to what Celi's sentinel looks like o:

Can't wait for the next chapter :3

Celica wrote:*takes a break from repetitive computer paperwork*

LMAO Otaku Pirates! XD "Slores" indeed...

And omg I <333 Lucx's Sentinel! Oh but I love Liah's smexy bunny man too!

Thanks for posting another chapter bro, I needed something to give myself a break. >>;

Its going great so far, I hope you make it out.... alive.... XD

Zymes wrote:Woot I was waiting for a new post today. Checking the forums every now and then earlier today.

Hahaha! Good Luck with the girl, Zi! xD
Good chapter! Keep 'em coming!

Lucxene wrote:LOL, that would so fit me white clothes and a samurai person however...A sword would be too manly...So to fit my uke personality...XD It's a woman weapon naginata! With flowers all around.XD Oh geez it's such a funny fic.

Liah wrote:lol yus xD Bunny Man is uber smexy. Lucx and Kaz's are awesome too xD

Though I'm curious as to what Celi's sentinel looks like o:

Can't wait for the next chapter :3

Wow a lot of feedback...thanks guys, you guys are the ones keeping me going here XD; And don't worry, Cel's sentinel is gonna make an appearance preeetty soon =P.

Omg Zion and his "badass"-ness.... XDDD

Rofl at the weapons picking scene....our Bright Shadow escapades...it's Zi in a toy store.....that's filled with weapons... >>;

And whoooo for awesome smexy Sentinels! :O

OMG I was waiting for this chapter! XDDD

Lol the whole bookstore thing...I love it. Although not sure if I'd really be into a BarretxCloud romance but what the heck... XD

And like I said, I AM NOT CHANGING MY WEAPON! No matter what it looks like.... >>;; though I do think I made the right choice....Zi's gonna pay for mocking my weapon... *evil grin*

Although the whole scene with chasing Zi with the hammer....strangely reminds me of that Dragonball Z episode where Goku's task from King Kai was to try and hit that cricket Gregory on the head so he'd learn how to increase his speed......though in th

Lmao I guess Zi's really got himself into a pretty harsh boot camp, eh Liah?? XDDDD

Celica wrote:OMG I was waiting for this chapter! XDDD

Lol the whole bookstore thing...I love it. Although not sure if I'd really be into a BarretxCloud romance but what the heck... XD

And like I said, I AM NOT CHANGING MY WEAPON! No matter what it looks like.... >>;; though I do think I made the right choice....Zi's gonna pay for mocking my weapon... *evil grin*

Although the whole scene with chasing Zi with the hammer....strangely reminds me of that Dragonball Z episode where Goku's task from King Kai was to try and hit that cricket Gregory on the head so he'd learn how to increase his speed......though in th

Lmao I guess Zi's really got himself into a pretty harsh boot camp, eh Liah?? XDDDD

LOL xDD He really did. Awesome chapter btw Zi, I loved it. As did the one before, keep it up :3

I laughed so hard at the part with the ladder because it reminded me of an old Bugs Bunny cartoon xD

As for Celi's weapon.....<< if you poke Zi with it, will that be considered incest? o:

Liah wrote:

Celica wrote:OMG I was waiting for this chapter! XDDD

Lol the whole bookstore thing...I love it. Although not sure if I'd really be into a BarretxCloud romance but what the heck... XD

And like I said, I AM NOT CHANGING MY WEAPON! No matter what it looks like.... >>;; though I do think I made the right choice....Zi's gonna pay for mocking my weapon... *evil grin*

Although the whole scene with chasing Zi with the hammer....strangely reminds me of that Dragonball Z episode where Goku's task from King Kai was to try and hit that cricket Gregory on the head so he'd learn how to increase his speed......though in th

Lmao I guess Zi's really got himself into a pretty harsh boot camp, eh Liah?? XDDDD

LOL xDD He really did. Awesome chapter btw Zi, I loved it. As did the one before, keep it up :3

I laughed so hard at the part with the ladder because it reminded me of an old Bugs Bunny cartoon xD

As for Celi's weapon.....<< if you poke Zi with it, will that be considered incest? o:

XDD thanks for the feedback, I kinda delayed the chapter by one, but whatever << >>;. Lmao the whole CloudxBarret thing was er, an "in the moment thing" because Rocky III was on tv and when I heard Mr. T...yeah, I thought of that XD;. And omg, now that you mention it, yeah, in this case, you are Goku, and I am the cricket <_<, yet, I am the one getting trained lmao.

Glad you liked it XD. I had to quickly shift back into "comedic gear" after my fight scene and all << >>. And yup rofl, I got my "running up the ladder" thing from that Bugs Bunny cartoon =D.

Er, as for the part about the weapon...it's only incest if it penetrates any of my exterior parts...<<;. Let's hope that Celica isn't feeling particularly...dangerous o_o

Zion wrote:

Liah wrote:

Celica wrote:OMG I was waiting for this chapter! XDDD

Lol the whole bookstore thing...I love it. Although not sure if I'd really be into a BarretxCloud romance but what the heck... XD

And like I said, I AM NOT CHANGING MY WEAPON! No matter what it looks like.... >>;; though I do think I made the right choice....Zi's gonna pay for mocking my weapon... *evil grin*

Although the whole scene with chasing Zi with the hammer....strangely reminds me of that Dragonball Z episode where Goku's task from King Kai was to try and hit that cricket Gregory on the head so he'd learn how to increase his speed......though in th

Lmao I guess Zi's really got himself into a pretty harsh boot camp, eh Liah?? XDDDD

LOL xDD He really did. Awesome chapter btw Zi, I loved it. As did the one before, keep it up :3

I laughed so hard at the part with the ladder because it reminded me of an old Bugs Bunny cartoon xD

As for Celi's weapon.....<< if you poke Zi with it, will that be considered incest? o:

XDD thanks for the feedback, I kinda delayed the chapter by one, but whatever << >>;. Lmao the whole CloudxBarret thing was er, an "in the moment thing" because Rocky III was on tv and when I heard Mr. T...yeah, I thought of that XD;. And omg, now that you mention it, yeah, in this case, you are Goku, and I am the cricket <_<, yet, I am the one getting trained lmao.

Glad you liked it XD. I had to quickly shift back into "comedic gear" after my fight scene and all << >>. And yup rofl, I got my "running up the ladder" thing from that Bugs Bunny cartoon =D.

Er, as for the part about the weapon...it's only incest if it penetrates any of my exterior parts...<<;. Let's hope that Celica isn't feeling particularly...dangerous o_o

Omfg LMAO

*falls off her chair laughing*

Liah wrote:

Zion wrote:

Liah wrote:

Celica wrote:OMG I was waiting for this chapter! XDDD

Lol the whole bookstore thing...I love it. Although not sure if I'd really be into a BarretxCloud romance but what the heck... XD

And like I said, I AM NOT CHANGING MY WEAPON! No matter what it looks like.... >>;; though I do think I made the right choice....Zi's gonna pay for mocking my weapon... *evil grin*

Although the whole scene with chasing Zi with the hammer....strangely reminds me of that Dragonball Z episode where Goku's task from King Kai was to try and hit that cricket Gregory on the head so he'd learn how to increase his speed......though in th

Lmao I guess Zi's really got himself into a pretty harsh boot camp, eh Liah?? XDDDD

LOL xDD He really did. Awesome chapter btw Zi, I loved it. As did the one before, keep it up :3

I laughed so hard at the part with the ladder because it reminded me of an old Bugs Bunny cartoon xD

As for Celi's weapon.....<< if you poke Zi with it, will that be considered incest? o:

XDD thanks for the feedback, I kinda delayed the chapter by one, but whatever << >>;. Lmao the whole CloudxBarret thing was er, an "in the moment thing" because Rocky III was on tv and when I heard Mr. T...yeah, I thought of that XD;. And omg, now that you mention it, yeah, in this case, you are Goku, and I am the cricket <_<, yet, I am the one getting trained lmao.

Glad you liked it XD. I had to quickly shift back into "comedic gear" after my fight scene and all << >>. And yup rofl, I got my "running up the ladder" thing from that Bugs Bunny cartoon =D.

Er, as for the part about the weapon...it's only incest if it penetrates any of my exterior parts...<<;. Let's hope that Celica isn't feeling particularly...dangerous o_o

Omfg LMAO

*falls off her chair laughing*

IT'S NOT A JOOOOOKKKKEEEE! D=! Well erm, to clarify, if she does anything to me that disables my sexual reproductive system, or gives me difficulty using the bathroom...yeah, it's incest <<;

Zion wrote:

Liah wrote:

Zion wrote:

Liah wrote:

Celica wrote:OMG I was waiting for this chapter! XDDD

Lol the whole bookstore thing...I love it. Although not sure if I'd really be into a BarretxCloud romance but what the heck... XD

And like I said, I AM NOT CHANGING MY WEAPON! No matter what it looks like.... >>;; though I do think I made the right choice....Zi's gonna pay for mocking my weapon... *evil grin*

Although the whole scene with chasing Zi with the hammer....strangely reminds me of that Dragonball Z episode where Goku's task from King Kai was to try and hit that cricket Gregory on the head so he'd learn how to increase his speed......though in th

Lmao I guess Zi's really got himself into a pretty harsh boot camp, eh Liah?? XDDDD

LOL xDD He really did. Awesome chapter btw Zi, I loved it. As did the one before, keep it up :3

I laughed so hard at the part with the ladder because it reminded me of an old Bugs Bunny cartoon xD

As for Celi's weapon.....<< if you poke Zi with it, will that be considered incest? o:

XDD thanks for the feedback, I kinda delayed the chapter by one, but whatever << >>;. Lmao the whole CloudxBarret thing was er, an "in the moment thing" because Rocky III was on tv and when I heard Mr. T...yeah, I thought of that XD;. And omg, now that you mention it, yeah, in this case, you are Goku, and I am the cricket <_<, yet, I am the one getting trained lmao.

Glad you liked it XD. I had to quickly shift back into "comedic gear" after my fight scene and all << >>. And yup rofl, I got my "running up the ladder" thing from that Bugs Bunny cartoon =D.

Er, as for the part about the weapon...it's only incest if it penetrates any of my exterior parts...<<;. Let's hope that Celica isn't feeling particularly...dangerous o_o

Omfg LMAO

*falls off her chair laughing*

IT'S NOT A JOOOOOKKKKEEEE! D=! Well erm, to clarify, if she does anything to me that disables my sexual reproductive system, or gives me difficulty using the bathroom...yeah, it's incest <<;

LOL..

I don't think Celi has the heart to ruin your uh.....baby-making kit? >>;;;;

Liah wrote:

Zion wrote:

Liah wrote:

Zion wrote:

Liah wrote:

Celica wrote:OMG I was waiting for this chapter! XDDD

Lol the whole bookstore thing...I love it. Although not sure if I'd really be into a BarretxCloud romance but what the heck... XD

And like I said, I AM NOT CHANGING MY WEAPON! No matter what it looks like.... >>;; though I do think I made the right choice....Zi's gonna pay for mocking my weapon... *evil grin*

Although the whole scene with chasing Zi with the hammer....strangely reminds me of that Dragonball Z episode where Goku's task from King Kai was to try and hit that cricket Gregory on the head so he'd learn how to increase his speed......though in th

Lmao I guess Zi's really got himself into a pretty harsh boot camp, eh Liah?? XDDDD

LOL xDD He really did. Awesome chapter btw Zi, I loved it. As did the one before, keep it up :3

I laughed so hard at the part with the ladder because it reminded me of an old Bugs Bunny cartoon xD

As for Celi's weapon.....<< if you poke Zi with it, will that be considered incest? o:

XDD thanks for the feedback, I kinda delayed the chapter by one, but whatever << >>;. Lmao the whole CloudxBarret thing was er, an "in the moment thing" because Rocky III was on tv and when I heard Mr. T...yeah, I thought of that XD;. And omg, now that you mention it, yeah, in this case, you are Goku, and I am the cricket <_<, yet, I am the one getting trained lmao.

Glad you liked it XD. I had to quickly shift back into "comedic gear" after my fight scene and all << >>. And yup rofl, I got my "running up the ladder" thing from that Bugs Bunny cartoon =D.

Er, as for the part about the weapon...it's only incest if it penetrates any of my exterior parts...<<;. Let's hope that Celica isn't feeling particularly...dangerous o_o

Omfg LMAO

*falls off her chair laughing*

IT'S NOT A JOOOOOKKKKEEEE! D=! Well erm, to clarify, if she does anything to me that disables my sexual reproductive system, or gives me difficulty using the bathroom...yeah, it's incest <<;

LOL..

I don't think Celi has the heart to ruin your uh.....baby-making kit? >>;;;;

True enough....buuuuuuut I don't know about my digestive system...I mean, her cookies did kind of....never mind, I probably shouldn't say it in public <<;